“Sabin’s gaze drifts from my face to the abyss behind us. My hopes sink to the bottom of my stomach at the sight of his expression. The brief spark of life fades until terror takes over once more. He stares ahead with a dire glare.

“No…” he whispers. Before I can respond, he’s looking at me. “Ria, run!”

I assume it’s the monsters again and ready a blast. That little glimmer in me, still refusing to let go of hope. But when I turn around to fire, I’m met with a gun against my forehead. The form of the wielder hides in the shadows, all except for a few features. Always the same. Pale green eyes. A menacing, superior grin. My blood runs cold.

“Hello, Miss Ariana."”

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The last entry of the main cast, folks! This is the main antagonist of the novel, Eric Bradley. He is Brigadier General to Panacea’s elite task force, the Seraphim. While it could be argued that Panacea as a whole are the main antags, Eric acts like a face of the organization. To Ariana and the Unseen, he is the source of their problems. It was him who captured Sabin and sparked the war. This success has put him in charge of hunting the rest of the Unseen, which is exactly what he wanted.

As always, you can click the read more to learn a little more about him! I hope you enjoyed learning about my OCs as much as I enjoyed making these. Would you like me to make some for the supporting cast as well? Let me know in the comments!!!

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Y’ALL

Omg I’ve been so excited to tell you this week’s update!!!!!!!! =D WE’RE FINALLY PROGRESSING!!! I finished chapter 14, and did the revisions for 15 and 16! Yes, we’re finally back on the revision train! I’m thinking there shouldn’t be any more big, new additions I’ll have to add. There might be a few smaller scenes, but for the most part, IT’S BACK TO MY LAST STOPPING POINT!

I had gone back and redid the beginning for some school things I was sending CC in for, but before I did that, I was almost to the end. Since revitalizing the beginning, I’m STOKED to finally get through the rest! I say this every time (lol), but I feel incredible about this revision. I honestly think this is the best version it’s ever been. There’s almost something magical about it. If it’s not the grand, publish-able version future me will end up with, it’s definitely close. I can’t wait to start sharing it with everyone!!!!!!

So, this week added up to 1633 original words total. I’m gonna be keeping up the same word count goal, but now that I’m at a different point in the revision, I’m gonna need new, bigger goals!

Let’s see…

-Write/Revise at least 500 words

-Revise the Damali reveal (you know the one)

-Write the new Dark Moment

-Write the new ending and Epilogue

-Add the lines we saved for later

-Make sure all the chapter songs flow

And my most ambition goal……..

-FINISH AND READ THROUGH IT ALL BY AUG 26!!!!!!!

Wish me luck, friends!!!! I wish you the same with your own goals!!! See you next week!!! ^_^